{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"31575977","dateCreated":"1292088852","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"katielewis48","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/katielewis48","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1291748882\/katielewis48-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31575977"},"dateDigested":1532172926,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"criticism","description":"I think that you did a great job on this essay. I think for me it got a little to complex sometimes, and it was harder for the reader to follow along. I think you sounded very smart, and you are a great writer and will be a great writer in the future.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31575681","dateCreated":"1292087680","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"leannehahn","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/leannehahn","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31575681"},"dateDigested":1532172926,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism ","description":"Your font reminds me of reading a newspaper, just sayin'.  I liked your essay, there was a fairly good amount of support.  Some points could have been stronger, but overall you did well.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31571711","dateCreated":"1292072209","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Bailey.S.","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Bailey.S.","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31571711"},"dateDigested":1532172926,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"I really liked your essay, especially the beginning, but some of the points towards the end were a little weaker. However, you used a lot of good support and did well overall.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31568149","dateCreated":"1292041204","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"c.shaw","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/c.shaw","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31568149"},"dateDigested":1532172926,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"This was a very good essay. Very interesting and easy to read. You also had pretty good word choice. Good job!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31566175","dateCreated":"1292035338","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"commandercool784","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/commandercool784","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31566175"},"dateDigested":1532172926,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"Excellent work on this essay.  First of all, the introduction was very good and set a good tone for the rest of it.  There was a good amount of support and a lot of good points.  Great stuff.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31564775","dateCreated":"1292031700","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"bnix21","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/bnix21","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31564775"},"dateDigested":1532172926,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism ","description":"This analysis is well thought out and well written. You do a very nice job of tying in the aspects of Romanticism with the story. You did a great job overall.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31525743","dateCreated":"1291993764","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"jaromager34","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jaromager34","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31525743"},"dateDigested":1532172927,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism ","description":"Great job using specific quotes from the text to support your points. However, I think your thesis could be stronger. It might help if you tied in points you're going to make through the essay, rather than just telling what the poem is about.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31524397","dateCreated":"1291993039","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"thad1","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/thad1","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1291864811\/thad1-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31524397"},"dateDigested":1532172927,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"The analysis is well organized and well cited. But there is one belief that I would like to point out. One can assume that the shadow that the knight saw later in the poem could just be psychological. The knight may just think that he is talking to a shadow. Even if the knight did see another person, would the two be able understand and communicate with each other properly?","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"31527427","body":"Thank you for your view point, but I think that I am going to just stick to my opinion of death, since I think that it connects better to Poe's life.","dateCreated":"1291994691","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Ldavidson18","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Ldavidson18","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"31524091","dateCreated":"1291992891","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"myoung7712","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/myoung7712","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31524091"},"dateDigested":1532172927,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"I like this essay and the way that it is written, but there are a few grammatical mistakes.  The conclusion is also a little weak and choppy, so if you rework a few sentences, it will be a lot better.  Good job.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31523557","dateCreated":"1291992568","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"trackkt7213","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/trackkt7213","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1292267488\/trackkt7213-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31523557"},"dateDigested":1532172927,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism ","description":"I thought your essay was extremely well written. Although I do agree with Ryan in it had a "researchy" paper feel to it. However, you did make some very good points and I felt as if I had read the story. Good job!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":true},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}