{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"31573203","dateCreated":"1292080358","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"KirkGower","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/KirkGower","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31573203"},"dateDigested":1532172886,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"I liked how you went into detail when describing Poe's life, and i really enjoyed this essay. Nice Work!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31569821","dateCreated":"1292054418","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"jcornett5","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jcornett5","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31569821"},"dateDigested":1532172886,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"Heads up you may want to delete those questions at the top! On a related note I thought you went in to detail really really on Poe's life and inspiration","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"31573111","body":"Thanks! Will do!","dateCreated":"1292080006","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"PaigeG24","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/PaigeG24","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"31569009","dateCreated":"1292045656","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"myoung7712","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/myoung7712","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31569009"},"dateDigested":1532172886,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"I like the way you wrote this, because it flows very well together. Sometimes the meaning you are trying to convey gets a little lost, but overall, this is a very good essay.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31568165","dateCreated":"1292041266","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"c.shaw","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/c.shaw","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31568165"},"dateDigested":1532172886,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"This was very nice and easy to read. I liked it a lot. I also learned from it. Good job!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31563665","dateCreated":"1292029555","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"bnix21","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/bnix21","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31563665"},"dateDigested":1532172886,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism ","description":"This is a great essay. You really did an amazing job. There is lots of support and it all flows together really well. I really enjoyed reading it. Awesome job!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31560065","dateCreated":"1292022919","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Oschwald17","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Oschwald17","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31560065"},"dateDigested":1532172886,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Critism","description":"You had a lot of great support in your essay. You had citable sources and you talked about every aspect. You hit Romanticsm and Poe's life with good evidence. You had a great essay.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31526057","dateCreated":"1291993961","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"jaromager34","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jaromager34","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31526057"},"dateDigested":1532172886,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism ","description":"I thought it was a really good essay, but there are two things I could point out. One is that you do not have a strong thesis statement. Also, your second paragraph could be split up into smaller paragraphs because it is very large.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31525855","dateCreated":"1291993830","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"ryan.barnes","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/ryan.barnes","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31525855"},"dateDigested":1532172886,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"The biggest thing I want to know is who Tripetta is. Why is he\/she friends with Hop-Frog, and what makes him have the same hate as Hop-Frog? In turn, that makes the rest of the essay seem quite confusing because I am just thinking of who Tripetta might be. Also, your points are good, but some of them lack sufficient support. And, a few of them also seemed like they had nothing to do with the thesis of the essay. Sorry, Paco, B-.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31524025","dateCreated":"1291992849","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"trackkt7213","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/trackkt7213","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1292267488\/trackkt7213-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31524025"},"dateDigested":1532172886,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"I thought your essay was very well written with good transitions. I liked reading this and thought the essay flowed very well. Good job!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31522019","dateCreated":"1291991492","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"aerundblom","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/aerundblom","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31522019"},"dateDigested":1532172886,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"A very good analysis of Edgar Allan Poe's "Hop-Frog". This essay is eloquently written, with good transitioning and much support. This essay really aids the reader in understanding the works of Poe and Dark Romanticism. This essay is very helpful and informative. Awesome job.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":true},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}