{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"23992653","dateCreated":"1273587442","smartDate":"May 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"qntnhooker","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/qntnhooker","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/23992653"},"dateDigested":1532172879,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Discussion-Hooker","description":"I believe this to be a very good essay.  Modernism traits were shown and explained throughout the essay.  After looking at the original poem, I found that first line is correct.  No quotations are needed because the words are summarized.  If there was one thing to change, I would clearly describe how McKay's life experiences affected his works.  I learned that McKay faced adversity.  He dealt with the everyday struggles of being an African American.  Overall this was a very good essay.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"23875847","dateCreated":"1273259146","smartDate":"May 7, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"luvlife5","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/luvlife5","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/23875847"},"dateDigested":1532172880,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Critque- Maddie B!","description":"The is a good essay, although the introduction paragraph could have more prelude to what the essay will talk about.  Also, the opening line, if it is taken from the poem, it needs to be in quotations.  Nice work :)","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"23992837","body":"Thank you maddie.  Perhaps you might want to read the poem, or maybe even check my sources before you make your claims.  I am aware that the first sentence of the essay is brilliant and it is indeed my own words.  Claude McKay the author of my poem did not use those words or any similar sequence.  Yes, I did use the title of the poem but not as the title but as a part of the sentence itself.","dateCreated":"1273587601","smartDate":"May 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"hibachi2020","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/hibachi2020","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}