{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"31568809","dateCreated":"1292044455","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Reddawn333","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Reddawn333","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31568809"},"dateDigested":1532173087,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"Really good body paragraphs that show a lot of support but I found the introductory and concluding paragraphs to be a bit weak.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31568239","dateCreated":"1292041594","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"ryan.barnes","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/ryan.barnes","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31568239"},"dateDigested":1532173087,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"I am pretty sure you answered the prompt, but there was a whole lot of summarization of the story, instead of describing points relating to the essay's reason.  But, still, I always like your writing, and this just continues on the same way. It is decent.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31564145","dateCreated":"1292030413","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"bnix21","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/bnix21","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31564145"},"dateDigested":1532173087,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"I liked your essay because I feel that it really does a good job explaining Romanticism. You went into great detail explaining the story, not necessarily a bad thing, but you did not really give a lot of examples of how it was a portrayal of Romanticism.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31561437","dateCreated":"1292025225","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"mattvermee","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/mattvermee","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31561437"},"dateDigested":1532173087,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"Your essay was very good. If I would say one thing that is wrong with it though is your introduction paragraph is pretty weak. Other than that it was very cool to read about why he named it Mr. Higginbotham's Catastrophe.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31559269","dateCreated":"1292021385","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Oschwald17","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Oschwald17","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31559269"},"dateDigested":1532173087,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Critism","description":"Your essay on Hawthorne was interesting. You had a lot of support about the Romanticism perion and how it pertained to your story. It was interesting to read about how his life has affected his stories, and how he uses the reoccuring themes of sin ang guilt.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31526327","dateCreated":"1291994130","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"jaromager34","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jaromager34","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31526327"},"dateDigested":1532173087,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism ","description":"I thought it was a good essay, but I think you need to make it more of an analysis. The majority of the essay was spent explaining the story very descriptively, which isn't as necessary as explaining why it relates to romanticism and the other questions we were supposed to answer. Also, you are lacking a thesis statement.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31524629","dateCreated":"1291993153","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"trackkt7213","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/trackkt7213","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1292267488\/trackkt7213-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31524629"},"dateDigested":1532173087,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"I liked your analysis, as it did a good job of explaining Romanticism. You had good transitions and it flowed very well. Good analysis!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31522145","dateCreated":"1291991588","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"aerundblom","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/aerundblom","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31522145"},"dateDigested":1532173087,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"This essay does a very nice job of explaining Nathaniel Hawthorne's background and how he wrote many short stories and poems.  This analysis also does a nice job of describing the short story and elaborating on many of the ideas throughout it.  In addition to the detailed style of writing, this essay does a very good job describing how the short story is a part of Romanticism.  Overall, a very well written analysis.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31512771","dateCreated":"1291963289","smartDate":"Dec 9, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"luke.reynolds10","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/luke.reynolds10","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31512771"},"dateDigested":1532173087,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"The summary of the story itself was very thorough and imformative, but I think that the essay could definitely use some more support and thought into analyzing it.  For example, in the section about how the work is categorized under Dark Romanticism, you seemed to be on the right track, but with some points of your own mixed with outside sources and citations, it would be better.  This is also true for the bulk of the first section.  More drawing conclusions and analyzing and less summation of the story would do a lot of good.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31506013","dateCreated":"1291948308","smartDate":"Dec 9, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"PaigeG24","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/PaigeG24","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31506013"},"dateDigested":1532173087,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"This felt like you summarized the story, rather than analyzing it.  There was not a ton of support because most of the essay was the summary.  So I would try not to summarize as much, and analyze a little more.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":true},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}