{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"31588191","dateCreated":"1292132279","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Janna_6","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Janna_6","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31588191"},"dateDigested":1532172843,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"The overall content of your essay was good, but your sentences seem kind of choppy.  I would suggest using more complex or compound sentences to give it a little variety and a better flowing style.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31576053","dateCreated":"1292089063","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"katielewis48","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/katielewis48","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1291748882\/katielewis48-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31576053"},"dateDigested":1532172843,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"criticism","description":"I thought that this was a great essay. You did a good job with identifying this essay with romanticism. You also did good with using a lot of sources and also good sources.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31574925","dateCreated":"1292085585","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"trackkt7213","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/trackkt7213","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1292267488\/trackkt7213-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31574925"},"dateDigested":1532172843,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"This essay was well written, however some of the transitions were a bit chopped, and you had some reduntant parts throughout, where I felt you could have elaborated or just taken out those parts altogether. However, it was still a good essay. Good job.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31573671","dateCreated":"1292081535","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"AmySpencer7","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/AmySpencer7","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31573671"},"dateDigested":1532172843,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"This was pretty good.  I liked how you pointed out that there was always a moral to Lowell's works.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31573239","dateCreated":"1292080440","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"KirkGower","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/KirkGower","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31573239"},"dateDigested":1532172844,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"I liked the essay, but your sentence structure gets very repetitive after a while. Other than that, Good Job.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31571917","dateCreated":"1292073640","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Ldavidson18","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Ldavidson18","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31571917"},"dateDigested":1532172844,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism ","description":"There were good solid points in the essay but it wasn't very smooth, and there were some redundant sentences, maybe revision of them? But overall, it was pretty good.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31569075","dateCreated":"1292046201","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"myoung7712","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/myoung7712","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31569075"},"dateDigested":1532172844,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"This essay has many valid points to be considered, but it is a little bit choppy and redundant.  There is a lot of restating the same thing, and the thoughts do not always flow well.  Overall, though, good job.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31568947","dateCreated":"1292045249","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Reddawn333","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Reddawn333","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31568947"},"dateDigested":1532172844,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"Good essay overall, but the intro and conclusion paragraphs could really use some work.  The body paragraphs were great and you used excellent support however.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31567553","dateCreated":"1292039297","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Bailey.S.","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Bailey.S.","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31567553"},"dateDigested":1532172844,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"You made some really good points in your essay, and had good support, but it seemed like more elaboration was needed in some places, especially when you were talking about Lowell's use of Romanticism characteristics.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31565797","dateCreated":"1292034308","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"commandercool784","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/commandercool784","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31565797"},"dateDigested":1532172844,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"I thought that there was good information present in your essay, but I felt that the sentences lacked flow.  It seemed like the information was just stated plainly without a good connection between it all.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}