{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"31575471","dateCreated":"1292087025","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"leannehahn","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/leannehahn","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31575471"},"dateDigested":1532172826,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Cricism","description":"This essay is very well put together, and I like how you go more in depth in your explanations.  You probably could have used a few more parenthetical citations, but other than that it was good!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31569109","dateCreated":"1292046501","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"myoung7712","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/myoung7712","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31569109"},"dateDigested":1532172826,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"Some good points, but in the last paragraph, make sure you have the right use of "its" or "it's".  Good job.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31568053","dateCreated":"1292040804","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"c.shaw","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/c.shaw","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31568053"},"dateDigested":1532172826,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"You should probably proofread this again, and you may want to include more examples of Romanticism.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31567605","dateCreated":"1292039434","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"bnix21","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/bnix21","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31567605"},"dateDigested":1532172826,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"An extremely good analysis. You provided good support throughout and had good transitioning. It also had nice flow to it. Overall, a very good essay.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31561525","dateCreated":"1292025346","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"mattvermee","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/mattvermee","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31561525"},"dateDigested":1532172826,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"I agree with Luke's view on this essay. You should go into deeper thought about how it relates to the Romanticism period. Other than that, it was very interesting to read about how and when it was written.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31527895","dateCreated":"1291994944","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"jaromager34","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jaromager34","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31527895"},"dateDigested":1532172826,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"criticism ","description":"Great use of historical facts to give perspective to the story so that the reader can better understand where the author was coming from when writing it. Awesome job.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"31528107","body":"Oh, but I also think you need to give more examples and explanation as to why the work relates to Romanticism.","dateCreated":"1291995044","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"jaromager34","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jaromager34","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"31525023","dateCreated":"1291993355","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"trackkt7213","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/trackkt7213","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1292267488\/trackkt7213-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31525023"},"dateDigested":1532172826,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"You had very good examples and it was very well written. Your support was also very good, and transitions were good. Good job.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31522271","dateCreated":"1291991661","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"aerundblom","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/aerundblom","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31522271"},"dateDigested":1532172826,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"A very, very well written analysis.  The style of writing in this analysis is very good, possessing much support and using proper grammar and good transitioning.  There is much support throughout this essay, and there are many examples provided.  Overall, it is a very good analysis!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31512847","dateCreated":"1291964025","smartDate":"Dec 9, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"luke.reynolds10","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/luke.reynolds10","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31512847"},"dateDigested":1532172826,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"I thought the essay presented some nice points dealing with the story itself, but it is lacking a bit when referring to the prompt about how the work fits into the Romanticism period.  I think you could use some more elaboration on this topic as a whole.  Also, you may want to consider adding a variety of outside sources.  This would help you to not only illustrate some new ideas, but it would help to prove and elaborate on your own points.  Other than the issue of support, I thought it was a well written essay because of its fluidity and organization.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31506273","dateCreated":"1291948575","smartDate":"Dec 9, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Ldavidson18","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Ldavidson18","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31506273"},"dateDigested":1532172826,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"I think you need to include more examples of how it relates to romanticism. Maybe include something with patriotism and romanticism since it is discussing the industrialization time period. But also proofread again.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":true},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}