{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"31588243","dateCreated":"1292132798","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Janna_6","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Janna_6","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31588243"},"dateDigested":1532172803,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism.","description":"The content and organization of your essay was great. The only thing I would suggest is to avoid using the pronoun "we" and any other similar pronouns that are first person.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31576117","dateCreated":"1292089295","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"katielewis48","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/katielewis48","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1291748882\/katielewis48-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31576117"},"dateDigested":1532172803,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"Matt, I thought that you had a great essay. You had a great ammount of sources to back you up, which created a strong essay.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31571731","dateCreated":"1292072477","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"thad1","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/thad1","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1291864811\/thad1-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31571731"},"dateDigested":1532172803,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"The thesis statement is powerful in my opinion. Also, the fact that you were able to use the Bible as support is pretty impressive as well. Overall, the essay was well organized and it had enough support in it as well.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31569123","dateCreated":"1292046703","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"myoung7712","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/myoung7712","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31569123"},"dateDigested":1532172803,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"Some solid points, just make sure the essay is proofread.  Good job.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31569037","dateCreated":"1292045909","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"AmySpencer7","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/AmySpencer7","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31569037"},"dateDigested":1532172803,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"The thing I most remember was your reference to the Bible. A lot of essays shy away from religious volumes like that, so it was unexpected, but cool.  Also, I think this you did a good job of comparing this particular work to others by Poe.  The connections brought everything together.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31568913","dateCreated":"1292045143","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Reddawn333","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Reddawn333","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31568913"},"dateDigested":1532172803,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"Impressive fluidity throughout.  The analysis seems to flow from one point to another very well.  The support used throughout was excellent and overall I'm very impressed by the quality of it.  Good job.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31568201","dateCreated":"1292041417","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"c.shaw","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/c.shaw","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31568201"},"dateDigested":1532172803,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"Pretty good. You answered all the questions well. I learned a little bit from this essay which is good. Good job.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31565167","dateCreated":"1292032701","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"commandercool784","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/commandercool784","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31565167"},"dateDigested":1532172803,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"I really enjoyed reading your essay.  I knew many of the points that you made, because I analyzed two of Edgar Allan Poe's works myself.  You had very good use of support to back up all of your ideas.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31564453","dateCreated":"1292030935","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"bnix21","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/bnix21","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31564453"},"dateDigested":1532172803,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"I really liked this essay. I also liked how you wrote about how his childhood affected his view of the world and how it showed in his works. It is certainly easy to see now why Poe is the poster-boy of Dark Romanticism.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31559409","dateCreated":"1292021631","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Oschwald17","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Oschwald17","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31559409"},"dateDigested":1532172804,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Critism","description":"Your essay was good. You had a lot of details about Poe's life. You had a lot of support to tell how his works and how his life affect his stories, but there did not seem to be much in the way of Romanticism. You talked about it a little, but you did not go through it throughly.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":true},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}