{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"31575171","dateCreated":"1292086378","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"leannehahn","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/leannehahn","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31575171"},"dateDigested":1532172775,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism ","description":"Overall, I enjoyed you essay!  You did you "I" and "you" a lot, which I don't think we're supposed to do, but other than that it was good!  Your points were clear and I understood what you were trying to say.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31574737","dateCreated":"1292085118","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"trackkt7213","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/trackkt7213","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1292267488\/trackkt7213-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31574737"},"dateDigested":1532172775,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"I liked your essay, as you made some good points. However, there were some uses of "I" and "you," which aren't supposed to use. But I did enjoy reading your essay.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31571831","dateCreated":"1292073207","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Ldavidson18","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Ldavidson18","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31571831"},"dateDigested":1532172775,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism ","description":"You had some good points and support, but you used words such as "you" and "I" and "me," which is a huge English essay don't.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31569295","dateCreated":"1292048450","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"AmySpencer7","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/AmySpencer7","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31569295"},"dateDigested":1532172776,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"This was good, and I liked your strong support.  You might however, want to make it sound more scholarly.  We're really not supposed to be using words like "you" and "I".","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31569153","dateCreated":"1292047010","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"myoung7712","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/myoung7712","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31569153"},"dateDigested":1532172776,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"Very good, solid points, just make sure to proofread and get rid of the voodoo words such as "you" or "I".  Good job.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31567771","dateCreated":"1292039912","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Bailey.S.","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Bailey.S.","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31567771"},"dateDigested":1532172776,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"I think you have a really good grasp on the ideas of Romanticism and got your points across very well. I also thought your comparisons were good and had a lot of support behind them.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31561683","dateCreated":"1292025613","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"mattvermee","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/mattvermee","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31561683"},"dateDigested":1532172776,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"This essay was very well written and I can tell you really did work in this essay. I agree with Paige and say you need a few more citations, and I also agree with Madison that you need to cut down on the personal pronouns. Great essay though!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31559921","dateCreated":"1292022656","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Oschwald17","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Oschwald17","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31559921"},"dateDigested":1532172776,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Critism","description":"You had a great and detailed essay. You should cut down on the use of the personal pornouns. I can tell that you researched yout topic and knew what you were talking about.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31522773","dateCreated":"1291992035","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"aerundblom","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/aerundblom","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31522773"},"dateDigested":1532172776,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"I enjoyed reading this analysis.  It has a good amount of support, which always proves helpful to the reader in understanding the work as well as Romanticism in general.  Overall, a very good job.  Well done!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31506599","dateCreated":"1291948918","smartDate":"Dec 9, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"PaigeG24","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/PaigeG24","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31506599"},"dateDigested":1532172776,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"I think that you gave a lot of support, but I think that it would help to add a few more citations.  Overall, I feel that you answered the questions fairly well.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}