{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"31588141","dateCreated":"1292131930","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Janna_6","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Janna_6","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31588141"},"dateDigested":1532172765,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"You did a good job with analyzing the work, but you had a few minor errors such as "exemplary" and the use "your".  Otherwise, good job.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31575657","dateCreated":"1292087581","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"leannehahn","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/leannehahn","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31575657"},"dateDigested":1532172765,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism ","description":"Your essay was very good, and it used a great amount of support.  To me it seems just a little short, but your font is really small so that's probably why.  Great job!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31573257","dateCreated":"1292080525","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"KirkGower","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/KirkGower","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31573257"},"dateDigested":1532172765,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"Take time to get rid of words like "you" and say "the reader" instead of something like that. Otherwise, nick work!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31569785","dateCreated":"1292054010","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"jcornett5","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jcornett5","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31569785"},"dateDigested":1532172765,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"I really thought your explanation of Dark Romanticism was pretty funny but at the same time it was really informative and put it in a very easy to udnerstand way.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31569175","dateCreated":"1292047232","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"myoung7712","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/myoung7712","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31569175"},"dateDigested":1532172766,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"Some good points and good organization, just make sure to get rid of words such as "you".  Good job.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31565175","dateCreated":"1292032722","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"c.shaw","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/c.shaw","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31565175"},"dateDigested":1532172766,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"This essay was okay. You may want to go over it again to make sure you do not have any spelling or grammar mistakes. I think in the first sentence of the second paragraph you said something a little funny that made me reread that sentence. Also, in the first paragraph you said something about doing it in the teenage fashion..but that did not make a lot of sense because you did not set it apart with comas. I'm not exactly sure if you should set them off with comas, but I am pretty sure you should. Another thing you might want to do is take one last look at the three questions we are supposed to be answering, and you should make sure that you answer them thoroughly. I do not know if I didn't catch this, but I don't think you compared your story to another piece of literature. Also, make sure you do not use the word "you" in your essay. Overall, the essay was pretty good. You may just want to look over it again and add some more detail and citations.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}