{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"31599129","dateCreated":"1292182079","smartDate":"Dec 12, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Brandonkuhl","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Brandonkuhl","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31599129"},"dateDigested":1532172703,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism ","description":"I like how you used direct quotes and explained them.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31588101","dateCreated":"1292131722","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Janna_6","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Janna_6","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31588101"},"dateDigested":1532172703,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"You did a good job at keeping your essay interesting, opposed to how other essays usually ramble on and bore everyone to death. I pretty much loved your line "How it must have shaped young Herman's beliefs to hear this great oak of a man talk...".","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31573919","dateCreated":"1292082246","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"AmySpencer7","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/AmySpencer7","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31573919"},"dateDigested":1532172703,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"This was very detailed and descriptive. The only I really have to say is that your long cited passages made it seem like you were just using them for their length. They were relevant, but it detracted from the quality of your writing a bit.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31570059","dateCreated":"1292057078","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"himynameisnikkiandiam5feettall","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/himynameisnikkiandiam5feettall","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1292055623\/himynameisnikkiandiam5feettall-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31570059"},"dateDigested":1532172703,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"You definitely had a lot of support in your essay; however, there were also a lot of evident mistakes. Make sure there are quotation marks around the title of the story. Also, this did not make very much sense to me: "Romanticism by definition is 'But in the 18th century the term came to designate a new kind of exotic landscape which evoked feelings of pleasant melancholy'"
\nI think you should have summarized the definition or used a different part of it; that sentence does not flow and it is confusing to the reader.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31559833","dateCreated":"1292022495","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Oschwald17","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Oschwald17","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31559833"},"dateDigested":1532172703,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Critism","description":"YOur essay was outstanding. I can tell that you put a lot of effort into making it an awesome essay. You have a lot of details and adjectives that kept me interested.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31512995","dateCreated":"1291965399","smartDate":"Dec 9, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"luke.reynolds10","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/luke.reynolds10","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31512995"},"dateDigested":1532172703,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"I thought the sheer length and description of your essay made it an excellent work. Not only did you explain your own points well, but you included some useful cited sources' information as well. I especially liked your analysis of the life of Melville compared to the story. This seemed to be your most important topic, and I think you did well explaining it. The only advice I would give you is to possibly get even more cited information from a wider variety of sources.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31506865","dateCreated":"1291949224","smartDate":"Dec 9, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"PaigeG24","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/PaigeG24","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31506865"},"dateDigested":1532172703,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"I think that you did a very good job on this essay. You gave a lot of support, and that helped me to understand what you were talking about.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31506807","dateCreated":"1291949156","smartDate":"Dec 9, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Ldavidson18","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Ldavidson18","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31506807"},"dateDigested":1532172703,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"Good job on this essay. I think that you gave very good support for how the story was influenced by Melville's life. There were good connections from point to point.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}