{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"31569997","dateCreated":"1292056708","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"himynameisnikkiandiam5feettall","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/himynameisnikkiandiam5feettall","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1292055623\/himynameisnikkiandiam5feettall-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31569997"},"dateDigested":1532172683,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"I liked all the description in your essay, however, I would change a few things.  The first evident thing I noticed was that you should probably put a comma after "1866" in the first line; it would make it more grammatically correct I think.  Also, I would make the closing paragraph a big more conclusive.  It kind of leaves the reader hanging.  The body of your essay was good, though!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31523907","dateCreated":"1291992782","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"luke.reynolds10","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/luke.reynolds10","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31523907"},"dateDigested":1532172683,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"I thought you illustrated some well thought out points, but I think these points still could have used some more support to back up these points.  I think this would have not only made your essay longer, but it would have helped to make it more thorough as well.  Other than that, I thought it was a nice essay.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31517911","dateCreated":"1291987449","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Ldavidson18","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Ldavidson18","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31517911"},"dateDigested":1532172683,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism ","description":"This essay was pretty good. The topics were there, and you had good support of them. However, some of the sentences were redundant and needed revision, a few towards the end of the second paragraph.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}