{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"31575643","dateCreated":"1292087483","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"leannehahn","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/leannehahn","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31575643"},"dateDigested":1532172640,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism ","description":"Dear Derp, <br \/>\nI hope you are going to finish this essay.  I know you are working right now, so the chances of that happening are small.  You might want to delete the thing that says &quot;Delete this&quot; a the top of the page.  Good form, I like it!  Hope you finish.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31572019","dateCreated":"1292074454","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"thad1","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/thad1","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1291864811\/thad1-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31572019"},"dateDigested":1532172640,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"At first, I was assuming that you did not finish yet. Hopefully the entire essay will turn out smooth. The specific sources you have used so far are excellent though. The only concern I have is your one use of three sources in the same sentence. Other than that, the essay is not bad at all.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31569939","dateCreated":"1292056329","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"himynameisnikkiandiam5feettall","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/himynameisnikkiandiam5feettall","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1292055623\/himynameisnikkiandiam5feettall-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31569939"},"dateDigested":1532172640,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"I am not entirely sure if this is your entire essay or not.  If it is, you might want to include a closing paragraph that, well, actually concludes the essay.  If you are not finished, so far the essay looks good!  A couple tips though: You might want to delete the instructions at the top of the page, and throughout your essay, when you refer to the stories you have been using italics.  Short stories and poems, I found out today, are not italicized; instead use quotation marks!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31567599","dateCreated":"1292039417","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Bailey.S.","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Bailey.S.","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31567599"},"dateDigested":1532172640,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"Some of the sentences lacked flow between them, but the support that you used was good. I also think that there were a lot of details that you could have connected more, but all in all the essay was good.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31506589","dateCreated":"1291948909","smartDate":"Dec 9, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Ldavidson18","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Ldavidson18","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31506589"},"dateDigested":1532172640,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"For one, make sure you proofread it again, because there were a few grammatical errors. Secondly, it was not quite smooth. It did not exactly tie the points together, maybe try more transitions. Also, give more examples on how Poe's life influenced the poem. You gave support on his life, but not quite enough on how that connected to the poem itself.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}