{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"31572121","dateCreated":"1292075215","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"thad1","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/thad1","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1291864811\/thad1-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31572121"},"dateDigested":1532172585,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"Good analysis on the poem. I like the fact that everything that needs to be mentioned about the poem is mentioned. It featured a ton of support as well as mention the poetic devices that make the poem so interesting. Unfortunately, where's the thesis statement? Would the last sentence of your analysis be considered your thesis?","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31569847","dateCreated":"1292054758","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"himynameisnikkiandiam5feettall","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/himynameisnikkiandiam5feettall","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1292055623\/himynameisnikkiandiam5feettall-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31569847"},"dateDigested":1532172585,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"You seemed to really go into detail in your essay.  You had multiple references, which shows that you actually did quite a bit of research and covered your topic thoroughly.  I liked your choice of words; I thought your essay flowed and expressed your thoughts very clearly.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31528399","dateCreated":"1291995178","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"ryan.barnes","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/ryan.barnes","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31528399"},"dateDigested":1532172585,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"This is an excellent essay with really good support.  Clearly, it was well thought-out, and it is pretty impressive.  Excellent work!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31527583","dateCreated":"1291994771","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"jaromager34","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jaromager34","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31527583"},"dateDigested":1532172585,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism ","description":"I thought it was a good essay, with an excellent use of support. However, I think you need a more specific thesis statement and make sure you proofread and have all of the poems or short stories you reference in quotes, because I believe you missed a few. Good Job though!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}