{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"31588061","dateCreated":"1292131562","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Janna_6","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Janna_6","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31588061"},"dateDigested":1532172567,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"Your essay was awesome.  The part discussing the "doppelganger" was interesting, and I also liked your explantion of how his family life impacted his writing.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31576245","dateCreated":"1292089761","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"katielewis48","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/katielewis48","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1291748882\/katielewis48-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31576245"},"dateDigested":1532172567,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"I thought that you had a great essay. I also thought that you had a great intro and conclusion paragraph! Great Essay!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31573553","dateCreated":"1292081224","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"KirkGower","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/KirkGower","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31573553"},"dateDigested":1532172567,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"You were very specific in your points and did a very nice job supporting them. Your sentence structure also flowed very well and it is clear that you put lots of time into this essay. Nice Job!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31569835","dateCreated":"1292054624","smartDate":"Dec 11, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"himynameisnikkiandiam5feettall","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/himynameisnikkiandiam5feettall","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/pic\/1292055623\/himynameisnikkiandiam5feettall-lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31569835"},"dateDigested":1532172567,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"It is very evident that you did a lot of quality research for this essay.  Instead of covering broad, generic topics, you really went into depth and explained yourself very well.  You also worded things very well yourself; you did a good job of explaining your points. Good job!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31569239","dateCreated":"1292047795","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"AmySpencer7","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/AmySpencer7","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31569239"},"dateDigested":1532172567,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"This was good, but I found it kind of general.  I think it would help if you would go more in depth on your topics.  Other than that, your word choice was really good, and you did have some interesting topics.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31568819","dateCreated":"1292044591","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Reddawn333","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Reddawn333","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31568819"},"dateDigested":1532172567,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"Great essay.  I mean wow that was fantastic, great support and everything.  I like your use of doppleganger and don't think you need to define it, but maybe some people should learn how to look a word's definition up when they don't understand it.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31561897","dateCreated":"1292025953","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"mattvermee","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/mattvermee","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31561897"},"dateDigested":1532172567,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"I agree with Jordan on your essay. Many readers, such as myself are not familiar with the word "doppelganger" and it would be very nice of you to define it. I really like the aspect you brought forward however in that paragraph and describing the use of a double character. Great job!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31560253","dateCreated":"1292023243","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"Oschwald17","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Oschwald17","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31560253"},"dateDigested":1532172567,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Critism","description":"You wrote a fantastic essay. You had a lot of information that you used wisely to get your point across. You did a great job!!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31526909","dateCreated":"1291994396","smartDate":"Dec 10, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"jaromager34","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/jaromager34","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31526909"},"dateDigested":1532172567,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism ","description":"Awesome intro & conclusion paragraphs and thesis statement. The only thing I have to say is that when you reference a "doppelganger," I think you should define it more clearly because some readers might find that to be confusing if they're not sure what a doppelganger is.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]},{"id":"31512971","dateCreated":"1291965100","smartDate":"Dec 9, 2010","userCreated":{"username":"luke.reynolds10","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/luke.reynolds10","imageUrl":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/pphsenglish332.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/31512971"},"dateDigested":1532172567,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Criticism","description":"I thought this was a well written essay.  More specifically, your transitions seemed to flow well most of the time, and you provided a lot of nice support to back up your points.  The only thing I would say is to possibly go even more in depth in some areas.  Incorporating more of your own points as well as a little support iwth them, would make your essay more effective overall.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":true},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}